Korrekturhinweise Oxfam Walk
accepted not accepted
0 marketing coordinator 1 43 years ago
around Cambridge
Cambridge to Bishops Stortford Cambridge to Pershop Stockfirst end of 1960s
in the 60s in the late 60s
40 years ago 5th May 60th
Cambridge Country Park Cambridge to
from Cambridge to Hilton Country Park in 1943
in Cambridge
in late 1960 (this would then be e.g.
November 1960) with 8,000 walkers years ago (too vague) 2 1 million pounds
£1 million a million pounds about 1 million pounds million pounds
$1 million
1,000,000 million pounds a lot of money (too vague) much money (too vague)
over 1 million pounds (she does not explicitly say that it is over £ 1 million) the late 60s
3 1,000 walkers 1,000 walkes a 1,000 walkers about 1,000 walkers one thousand people over 1,000 walkers thousand of walkers
1,000 visitors all kinds of people many people (too vague) thousand (too vague) thousands of walkers
4 a variety of routes
3 to 26 miles (includes all 4 options) 3-26 miles
4 different distances 4 different walks a variety of walks choice of distances choosing the miles different distances different distances to walk different length
different miles different routes different walks different ways distances four courses how long they walk lengths of walks making shortcuts nature and normal walk nature walk
nature walks park or nature walks routes
several routes
3 and 26 miles (implies only 2 distances) 3 or 26 miles (implies only 2 distances) the short or the long walk (implies only 2
distances)
short and long walks some different routes some routes
the distance of walking the miles
the miles they walk the route
the shortcuts variety of distances walks
5 50,000 pounds
£50,000 50,000
even more money for 50,000 more money more than £30,000 more than last year on 50,000
the 50,000 mark to 50,000
15,000 50,000 miles 50,000 participants 50,000 people 50,000 walkers from 40,000 to 50,000
the amount of money (too vague) the charity money (too vague) the income
the money (too vague) the price
the profit the score the win their share 6 volunteers
folunteers Oxfam volunteers unpaid helpers unpaid volunteers volentiers
voleonteers voluntaires voluntairies voluntears volunteers volunters volunteurs voluntiers voluteers
a big team (too vague) a great team (too vague) all the people
Headquarters (they do not largely organise it, they only support)
Oxfam (in the sound file there is a distinction between Oxfam and volunteers)
Oxford volunteers people which help students
the headqurters
7 Simon Watkins Samon
Simon
Simon Wakins Simon Walkens Simon Walkings Simon Walkins the chairman the current chairman the current chairman Simon the chairman Simon Watkins Watkins
co-chairman Hopkins new chairman Simon Hawkins
the organisor (too vague) Wilkins
www.oxfam.org (this is about the walk, not the position)
8 the 26 miles 26 miles the 26
the 26 mile route the 26 miles run the 26-mile walk the longest walk walk the 26 miles
the Oxfam walk the walk
the large walk (too vague) the longer way (too vague)
Justifications 0
Rosie says: “I work as the marketing coordinator.” Rosie therefore works for the charity Oxfam as the marketing coordinator.
1
Rosie says: “Well, the Oxfam Walk actually started 43 years ago. It started in the late 60s.” The first Oxfam Walk therefore took place 43 years ago, in the late 60s.
2
Rosie says: “And since then it’s expanded. We now get about over 1,000 walkers every year and to date we’ve raised about £1 million.” So far the charity event has therefore brought in about £1 million.
3
Rosie says: “Each year we have around 1,000 walkers.” The annual event therefore attracts 1,000 walkers.
4
Rosie says: “Well, there is a variety of routes and you can do 3 miles and, and that’s within the park and this year it’s a bit special because we’re gonna have some nature walks. If you are a bit more fit and healthy you can do 26 miles, […].”
The radio presenter (Amy) says: “That’s a bit of a jump from 3 to 26, isn’t it?”
Rosie says: “You can choose in between. There is an 8-mile and a 12-mile and of course if you get tired there’s always shortcuts on the way home.” Walkers therefore have a choice of routes.
5
Rosie says: “We’re hoping to make even more money this year than we did last year. […] Last year, we made just over £30,000. This year we are aiming for £50,000.” In this year’s walk Oxfam is hoping to raise £50,000.
6
Rosie says: “The Oxfam Walk is entirely run by volunteers. We do have help from Oxfam headquarters, but the planning, the marketing and all the people that help on the day all are unpaid volunteers.” The event is therefore largely organised by volunteers.
7
Rosie says: “If you do want more information, you can contact our current chairman. His name is Simon Watkins and his phone number is 01223 526157.” To find out about the job offer you therefore need to get in touch with the current chairman, Simon Watkins.
8
Rosie says: “If I can find the time, I’d like to do the 15 mile, ‘cause I don’t think I could do the 26.” Rosie therefore does not think she is fit enough to do the 26-mile run.
